For day 1 activity 2 I decidde to comment on Matheus's blog post. His blog post was an advertisement about toothpaste.
I first wrote the things I like about his post. Then I asked a question at the end. In his post he said what toothpaste does to your teeth. Then I asked if diffent types of toothpaste make your teeth good loking.
Kia Ora Fotu,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter for the Summer Learning Journey, it is awesome to see you completing the activities for this first week and I hope to see more from you over the summer!
I found this activity really fun as I liked seeing all the positive, thoughtful and helpful comments being left on everyone's blogs. I like that you added some information on what the blog post is about and what you were going to write in your comment. Your comment was great, you mentioned something you liked about their post and asked a relevant question that would encourage a reply that will start a comment thread. Personally when I write or receive comments I like to add something the links the post to me, for example mentioning what kind of toothpaste you use or a fact you know about the topic.
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Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Kia Ora Zana,
ReplyDeleteI'm just so surprised someone from the summer learning journey actually commented on my blog and gave me some feedback. Sorry for the late comment I was not active on my device.
But thanks again for the comment and I will do your form and do summer learning journey in the summer. Do you comment on people's blog from different schools?